My Frightening Accident
There was a frightening accident that occurred near my bedroom 2 weeks ago. I looked for a towel outside my room and then I heard crackled sound that I guessed it came from the path. My thought decided to take walk for checking it as quick as I could. I was surprised no one walking on the path. Afterward I walked and hid behind the nearest wall. I set my ears to ensure what it was. While I was waiting for 30 minutes, I decided to go into my bedroom then I waited for. My friend came closer to tell there were rats that made noise through the path. The accident was made by the rats, which were finding food on the path.
In line 4, it should be "I was surprised that no one was walking on the path"
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is it "frightening accident" or " frightening incident " ?
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