Illa's Appearance
Illa is a girl who is interested in fashion mode. She always wants to show new fashion mode to others. She also pays attention on her appearance. She has a different style from the others. Tiger motive is the most favorite motive, as Illa shows everyday. She has many collection of clothes such as blouse, skirt and high-heel with tiger motive. The high-heel has 5 centimeters high and full with tiger motive. It makes her comfort and she always feels confidence when she takes walk on the high-heel. The types of her high-heels are striped tiger motive, original tiger motive and mixed cat with tiger motive. Illa is really cares of her appearance for showing the new fashion mode.
What a nice explanation about Ila's appearance, but hey dude, I know ILA has bigger size than us, but dont make it to be a reason to make Her name has double LL wkkwkw... And I found in line 6, the word "comfort" is better to replace by "comfortable" because I think "comfortable" is an adjective and "comfort" is a noun. What do you think mate ?
ReplyDeleteLet me think and find some sources to make it clear. Thanks a lot for your comment Mr. Oka, nice correction.
ReplyDeleteHonestly I don't understand with the symbol ";;" that you put in the end of the 1st sentence, or maybe u did it unintentionally.. i hope so..then, in line 3-4 i think it should be "Tiger motive is the most favourite motive of hers" to make a clear explanation and to indicate that tiger motive is exactly Illa's favourite. Thank you, Sir..
ReplyDeleteHello Radha. It's not a symbol, but that's human error dha. That's good revision.I love it. Thanks a lot. Roger then.
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